Wow [i]that[/i] is so sad.

I like this. The message/meaning is clear and strong. However, you go from talking about yourself singularly in the 1st stanza, to talking about "we" in the rest of the poem. The first stanza works on it's own, but when you change from "i" to "we" it gets confusing with the line "your face, not mine" This poem could almost work as 2 separate poems actually if you expanded more on each half (with the division before "we, secret-sister allies". Regardless, I liked it

amazing. i love it!
;D

Very pretty. The words flow nicely.