that is very beautiful...

Serindraxx

wow, this is sad, before your songs were happy but this is sad, I think the melody would be very heartbroken.

Acapella...what a great word. It makes me want to go "Acka, acka, acka, acka, acka, acka...etc." Anywho, I got a huge Caohme/Keiran vibe here. Like, a major one. And it sounds really pretty, I hope Fine Line gets made into a movie and then they use this as the main title song and then I could hear it. So basically I really want to hear it, but how you described it sounds pretty dog dang awesome, so shimmy on over to a record studio because I want to hear it. Like, I want to hear it A Lot.

That's right, with captialization.

Anywho, it sounds really super sweet awesome, and good job!

Billions of smiles for you, a a key lime pie because they are just so tasty.)

Toddles,

Danielle)

Can I get the soundtrack? Nice job!

Ok, other than being funny, is there a point to giving the readers treats and stuff? It is like the funniest thing I have ever seen, and it killed me when I read Fine Line :D