This was such a sweet read. The dialogue was very well done and the situation they're in is so plausible. My only nitpick would be the ending, just because it seems like Chase acquiesced a little soon, perhaps.

Lol, that was so sweet!

Cute story, but the the mention of Chase and his homosexuality is quite abrupt. There was no indication anywhere and then suddenly he said he could get used to Owen kissing him. I suppose that's why it's a story and why I like it; happy endings are good.:)

Nice one-shot, glad to see it ended well. :]

I really enjoyed this.
It's very well written and has a nice pace and development. And SO sweet at the end!
Great job!

Le sigh. This was so beautiful. I'm just sad that it was a ones hot and that there's no more to come. Of course, as the author, you could always change your mind. I mean, there's so much to tell...so much! But that's just my humble opinion. I loved your characters. Chase and Owen are wonderful. Your dialogue is perfect, the writing has wonderful flow and momentum. it was just lovely. Naturally, I'm going to have to read more of your writing. It's only fair. :0

this is good

Hi! Just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this. It seems like such a realistic portrayel of a relationship when one has a homophobic dad. Very nicely done.