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This was stunning work. I love the fact that it did not rhyme because I think rhyming such an intense topic would not have done it justice. This really captured the bewilderment of a child, though, and yet still brought across all the points you wanted to mention. Excellent job.

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-Shan-

very raw and poweful, fantastic. reminds me somewhat of my thoughts on 9/11(i was 6 at the time)

incredibly powerful, wow, i cried because i know there are so many people who have to live with these questions