Nice. I like how this is going. However, one problem is that it seems a bit anachronistic. Like if it's set in another 'world', where things are a bit older, you know, then how come they talk so normally. And how come - I don't know, it just confuses me a bit. The dialogue style is fine,I think you should just insert small details that would make the setting a bit more clear. However, you've kept my attention, and I am looking forward to reading more!