a beautiful twist at the end there.
and hey, this is inspiration!

now this...this is fantastic.

This one is my favorite. Not so much of an original idea, but still.

-LoL

"Breaking my body to be the girl who fits into your arms just right." This line is incredibly powerful. I love how ED stands for 'eating disorder.'

"What's the point of perfection if it's easy?" Brilliant twist.

even if this isn't as wonderful as the hand-written copy, i love it.

a good elaboration on the thought that extremely thin things, like thin paper, are see-through.

"And I'm good with that.
Happiness is a fresh baked
chocolate chip cookie." - made me happy.

"thinspiration". clever.
(:

this is interesting.
very in-your-face, in a good way.

Yeah, who cares what the "ideal" image of beauty is. If you find yourself beautiful, and you're happy, that's what really makes someone a beautiful person. Great idea for a series. Keep writing! :)

lovely set so far. dont have any suggestions, but keep up the great work.

wow, creepy, but evocative. most of the wrestlers who were friends with me in high school did a sweating out technique, where they rolled themselves up in a sleeping bag in front of a fireplace to lose water weight.

We never realized that it was dangerous, at the time.

I like this. I mean, at the same time, I don't. because it reminds me of that time in my life.

I was so deceived.

Mm. I wish I didn't understand this.

wow, that was awesome. first stanza is definitely my favorite though, I've got to say. it flows really well.

seventeen has a body image challenge? cool.