I especially like the first part. Really beautiful at first, and then it almost turns on itself. I like the contrast. Well done.
So sorry it took me so long to return your review. I was MIA for a while there. =] Thanks for the review.

You certainly turned the emotions backwards on this one. First you were admiring, then you end up coldly analyzing, it seems. It was a little hard to follow the second stanza, but I still felt the flow of this poem the whole time.