Wow. I really like this one, too. I very much like how the entire poem tapers down to nothing. :) Great job using the visual aspect on it. I like that a lot. Emphasizes the message of the poem.

This poem is simple, offers no images, but contains a very awesome sentiment. I like it very very much.

-Jesse
Attack of the review marathon! (link in profile)

just fill your cup at the nearest vodka spigot, i suppose.

"For water."... for

I like the lines here, how it looks visually, it's nice. I also like the idea of dying of wordlessness, it's interesting. The whole piece is interesting, the concept is unique and poses an interesting question.

PS If you're bored this weekend check out the Review Game and/or it's Review Marathon (link in my profile).

This is nice. It's a really original idea, and you rarely see a poem that's both this simple and this good.