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Subsequent Cross 2008-12-09 . chapter 1
That was so incredibly sweet!

You took a tired idea (a mysterious and helpful stranger) and drew me into it, kept me scrolling down the page without a single pause, and then had me do a little cheer for John at the end. It was a nice little come-around story, and I liked it. I hope to take a look at Jade next. :]
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