ahh taste the forbidden fruit Steven, and crave more!

wow oh wow this story is good!, and quite different than the other stories on here, oh i just love it

This story is fantastic. The twists and turns are perfect; its part I have no idea what to expect next and part I know what's going to happen but I'm excited to read further anyway. The character of Steven seems so left of center, if anyone else was trying to write him I don't think they'd be very successful; somehow you just seem to pull it off.

There are a few things that could use an editing eye, but they're so small in the grand scheme of things they're really insignificant. The only thing I want to point out here is that the first chapter seems a little muddled. The style became clearer as I read on, but I almost clicked the back button at the first several paragraphs, which may explain why you haven't gotten many reviews for this story. And it greatly deserves more.

Seth Steven Elopement!

excellent work like always!

wow this was such a sad chapter! really, if my dad had done these things to me, i would take a large hammer to his gravestone and totally destroy it. wrong i know, but so is abusing your child.

keep up the great work! i can't wait to read about what the 'situation' is with Matt!

geez every chapter is so emotionally driven, its practically scary! truly great work here, i don't have to say keep up the great work, because obviously, u do it every single time! but alas, i shall say it anyways! Excellent Work!

great work! there were a few grammar mistakes here and there, but really, they were very minor. keep up the great work!

I know how he feels well not sleeping with relatives but the abusive father thing. I sucks that he has so many kids but didn't get to raise them.

great chapter! I'm glad there's some form of closure between Steven and his mom. And Jenn seems cool, if a little scatter brained lol. Now all that there is left to deal with is the rest of family, especially Matt since I can see him confronting his brother over supposedly updetting their mother.

again, excellent work!

wow...that was a high emotion chapter! I sympathize with the mom now, but still, the main charcter has a lot of stuff to deal with still!

good job!

man, everyone is beating around the bush with the whole 'dad abused me as a child when none of u were looking but mom knew all this time'

can't wait to see how people deal with this when it comes out! not to mention the whole 'i'm sleeping with a relative' thing too!

keep up the great job!

wow this is a really intense chapter! i like how the main character is slowly trying to deal with everything being thrown at him. Wonder how he's gonna deal with his family's consistent insensitivities of his past. And the whole 'uncle sleeping with nephew' is crazy!

keep up the good work!

well this certainly is interesting! i like how there washardly any verbal communication in this chapter until the very end; it made a good twist of words that kept me intrigued! i look forward to reading more, especially about those last couple of sentences!