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Jess 2009-11-20 . chapter 11
Omg, that was an amazing chapter!! So much excitment, i had my eyes glued to the screen the entire time!! I was very excited to see the update ^^D I can't wait for the next one, please don't make us wait that long again *pouches out bottom lip*
dreams of rain 2009-11-20 . chapter 11
i love this story. when i finished "chosen" just a few minutes ago i freaked out the other students of my computer programing class from crying. i was so happy that the story didn't end there. i truly love this story and can't wait to read more. i can't wait to read what will come next. from what i have read so far, i think Aeleisa is the little girl that the king sees everyday, and that Aeleisa mother was from Sarlan. but you have also written about her father telling her to eat that special plant everyday, wich clearly she has not, so she might get what her mother had. this is what i think so far and i can't wait to see if i am right or not. mostly i look forward to the time Aeleisa and Roane meets again.
benozir 2009-11-17 . chapter 11
wow you didnt update for soo long. but anyway! thatwas an awesome chap!! their finally free from that hell hole. i know its a long way but i cant wait until alesia and roanda meet!
dawn9800 2009-11-17 . chapter 11
Great book! Can't wait to see what happens next!!
Qatariyah 2009-11-16 . chapter 11
getting somewhere..
dreamgazer220 2009-11-15 . chapter 11
YAY! I'm so glad that you updated! And this chapter was really intense, and I'm excited for the new character! Also, the sister thing reminded me of Aladdin, and it made me giggle. Awesome job, Sarah! Yay for writing again!
TJamie 2009-10-26 . chapter 10
I finished reading Chosen not too long ago and I'm very excited to see what happens next. I love stories like this; romance, adventure, and fantasy mixed. It's refreshing to read something other than another high school cliche. And this is written really well. You should consider getting these books published when you're finished with them.
Qatariyah 2009-10-22 . chapter 10
Hey,

the story is progressing well...
what's next? what's with the letter roane sent to aleisia in reply to her last un-finished letter?

u didn't mention the prince maryn getting closer to his father the king and being his confidante of sorts.?!!

hope to read the next chapters soon...
tc,
Jess 2009-10-04 . chapter 10
Yay, go Roane!! Girl needs to back off, lol. ;] Excellent chapter, can't wait for the next one! Try to update soon puhlease!!
geminibaby6789 2009-09-30 . chapter 7
Thanks for the chapter! I know...it's been a while. I just started school again and it's been hectic. 0.o Ok, back to the review. OMG! Someone come and rescue her already! Roanne! Where are you?! Aw...at leat Yani is there with her. Good man. ;D Keep it coming!
benozir 2009-09-30 . chapter 10
that was ana wesome chap!1 you didnt uploag for soo long . please upload soon
dreamgazer220 2009-09-29 . chapter 10
*pounces* IT'S ABOUT TIME! Yay! This chapter was pretty good... for some reason, I'm not all that surprised about Leina and Hayden ;) I think it's cute though! Maybe they'll conspire and figure out a way to help Aeleisa!
You know, I've been reading this series forever and I still have to check every time I spell her name, lololol.
The horse scene was cute =) I liked it.
Reading your chapters always inspires me to write, so off I go!
Here's a long review for a long-awaited update
latuacantante620 2009-09-28 . chapter 10
I admire you so much, being sick and still updating. I have to say I love how Roane was able to say no to Sulqin for Aeleisa but at the same time I feel sorry for Sulqin. I actually didn't imagine Hayden and Leina together which is surprising because I think they would make a great couple. For some reason, I saw her with Maryn at first. Lol, weird. Anyway, love where this is going. Amazing stories so far!
Tigery 2009-09-28 . chapter 10
Oh! Nice chapter! =]
Jess 2009-09-08 . chapter 9
Awesome chapter!! I love your writing, it is so captivating. The story seems to be moving a little slow though, but i love long stories!! I think we should get two updates since its been so long ;]
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