Wonderful! You just gave me inspiration for a story I'm currently writing. I really liked this. Aw, innocence. It's such a cute thing. Haha. I nearly fell out of my chair laughing when I read the line..."Is that it?" Haha. Little boys. Amazing. Really enjoyed reading this.

I really liked this one-shot! It's adorable, and very well written. I don't even usually like stories with 'little kids' as the main characters, but this was so cute! :) so, um, PLEASE would you consider doing a sequel with them in the teens or something? ;)

That was so cute!

It was so adorable!(cries) They're fishing in a puddle! (starts laughing and crying) I wish I was still five.
I just noticed, but your writing style is a lot like Carmac Mccarthy. I'm not sure if I spelled his name write. i could look it up . . .but . . .

That was really cute. The writing was beautifully descriptive, and the kids were so innocent. You're really good at writing in that little-kid voice; I totally believed some kids would say and do the things you had them saying and doing.

Okay, this review probably makes no sense because I'm tired and words are just pouring onto the paper. So . . . yeah. Loved it.

Aww, taht was really cute! And very well written too, the description of the rain in the first three paragraphs was very effective.

Loved it, well done!