So cute... even the death was adorable, if that makes any sense :D Love it

So I read this a little while ago, and like a douche, I didn't leave a comment. I thought I should do so now. ^_^ I only have nice things to say about this one: touching, sweet, sad, believable, ironic, enjoyable. Their relationship was nice, trajic.

One quick question, a couple of times now, I've encountered you using the word 'aghast'. Are you using the correct word? Forgive me if I'm being rude, I certainly don't mean to be so. You see, I *think* you're going for an idea that would be better described by words like 'tragic' or 'melancholy' (as the English 'aghast' is a synonym for words like 'horrified' and 'shocked' and 'startled'). Please forgive me for being so presumptious to point this out. *nervous smile* Remember I really like your work!

Oh, such sad irony. It's like a French movie.

You wrote Ren's struggle to get to Matt really well. Even with the flashbacks, you kept his sense of urgency and desperation and I was right there with him, running up the steps.

Aw... That's so sad!!

awh
i haven't cried this hard in a long time.
great story.

hey you have a nice story here and hey you really good and you don't have to change anything its all perfect and hey hm is it ok if you can check out my story sunset ,and read the seek peek to it in my info and the author is grace1o9...