Yo!

err...I have absolutely nothing to say [at least, nothing bad to say, lest you bite off my head]except that your plot is pretty good, so keep writing! And don't worry bout' the lack of reviewers, I'm sure you'll have more as the story progresses!

In the words of Cornelius "Louis" Robinson,
"KEEP MOVING FORWARD"

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Well, I liked the start of this because it was an interesting observation on the world etc about Karma and it really hooked me. I also liked the dialogue because it showed just how rude and arrogant your character is which added another dimension to her personality. If I were that fortune teller I would have kicked her out of my tent.

Anyway, good job so far,
-Ink-

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I would just cut the whole of the first section and explain the details of your character's life later on, distributing them throughout the story. The way you've done it here feels too much like an info-dump which is hard to read and not at all hooking for a reader.

The second part, however, I liked. It's a lot less static than the first part and what kid hasn't felt that way on the first day of school or the week? I feel that way about my light switch too, because it's at my door grr. Anyway, I thought this part of your story was authentic and well written

The use of 'daddy' by your mc establishes to me immediately that she's rich and spoilt. This is good because you're developing the voice of your character :D

I'm off to read the next chapter, good job with this,
-Ink-

Like always, command of english is flawless. good plot, build on it more and not have it like those stereotypical ones. dont leave the story hanging! okay, you can do that but dont let it all go down. you already have a very promising story. love it.

OMG!IT'S SO NICE!
the name is SO cool.
i like the way u describe
very detailed...
GO TESA!