lol..well u knw it was cool coz u managed to make us feel friendly wid ur behavior..and guess d word orgasm no longer will make us uncomfortable to review ur stories ne longer :P It was a good friendly feel reading ur first shot

You managed to get the conversational tone down to a dime! Perhaps this one-shot could've been slightly longer to develop the characters a bit more; other than that it was cute!

Sakina x

it's a nice one-shot. interesting how they're both staring at each other but they both don't know it

oh, i really liked it! :D

i love one shots, and especially ones that end like this ;p

I wish it was a bit longer, but I loved it.

Cute. :)

Aww how cute ;]

Green eyes!

Haha! Aw, how cute!

I loved it _

Lyra

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This was really cute. I loved it. I found it very enjoyable to read. I really wish you would continue this, I would love to see what happens between them.

That was adorable! I loved it. It made me giggle and it turned my day into a peachy-keen one!

I had to read the last few lines several times before I finally got it. Well you know me XD

Super cutee :D except for those awkward moments you added in there. I guess that adds to the "cuteness" in a way. yay.