Love it, I love the mysterious vibe. Great job, I got chills when I read the end. :)

Excellent! I've often thought that our dreams have the power to show us what is to come, and you did a nice job portraying that here!

wow XD i like it :)

I liked how you took an everyday scenario and turned it into something really scary.

One thing I would just like to point out for future writings. The set up this story follows (reality suddenly taking the shape of a previous nightmare-plot) is a popular plot set-up to use in horror and can be considered cliche or overused. Just keep that in mind for future horror pieces. Try to break the mold.