One would probably think that from the beginning of this essay, the rest would be about how my father has instilled a love of reading in me, n’est-ce pas? I could write a whole 500 word essay on that and more, but then I wouldn’t be mentioning anything else my father has done for me.

Cut that part out, it's unecessary. Never mention that you're writing something in the actual writing unless it serves a distinct purpose.

Also, don't make this so much about your father as it is about how your father influenced YOU. Because, as an admissions councelor told me, they aren't looking to accept your father, they are looking to accept you.

But I love the aspect you've taken about your father reading to you. It's so unique and probably really describes you as a person, since it's a very specific topic and has yet influenced you so much. Awesome! Just talk about yourself more, it won't come across as conceited. xD

Haha I'm doing essays right now too. xD Where are you applying?

Sally :D

I like your last sentence.