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Reviews For: I Dare You
Sweet Lemon Effect 2008-10-17 . chapter 1
Short, but with a good use of parallelism~
The sentences are very long though.
Eve's Deception 2008-10-16 . chapter 1
defintely feels like a vengeful piece, though clearly there is hurt. the repetition serves to empower the piece

truly,
eve
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