Aww where did you go? I like this story.

I loved this story! It's such a shame you haven't updated this in years. The sex scenes were very well done and fit nicely into the plot. But why did you have to stop with a cliffhanger of all things? :(

Azri's hiding something from Cale! Please...please update this story soon :( even if you must rewrite the prequel.

I actually kind of want to see Cale be on the giving end in sex as well... ;)

Ah.

Just to get the point across.

It's been more than two weeks.

Tsk tsk.

No more yummy chappies for me to read?

Ugh.

Now I have to find a new story and/or author to obsess over.

Too bad.

You were the best I'd found in awhile.

Bye bye for now at least.

I'll probably be back to stalk your other stories soon enough.

-Laney

great please update soon :3

I absolutely love this story! Sorry if I haven't reviewed, but I assure you that I have taken my time reading threw it. I read the first story now this! And I was shocked to discover that you have not uploaded in over 3 years. Are you going to continue writing this story? You haven't forgotten about it have you? Oh and I love Cale! even if he does seem to forget important details, and he doesn't question many things. but all in all its a very interesting tale, and I would love to see it with a proper ending. So please update soon, por favor? please? per favore? S'il vous plaît?

YER MAW

So I discovered this story and it's prequel yesterday, and I'm in love! This has to be one of the consistently best fantasy stories I've read on this site! Your description is amazing, as well as your characterisation. Not a thing in this is cliche at all! The storyline is original and enthralling, and despite you wanting to change the beginning of the first book, I think it's perfect. But I guess, with the insertion of the Magistrate, you'd want to change it.

You haven't really given any hints in the story where this is going to go next, other than them 'saving/destroying the world'. But I can't see how that'll happen anytime soon without some kind of build up! I've found that there are a few loose ends that haven't really been addressed. The one that first comes to mind is Ji'en calling Azri Ayden, and alluding to Azri's powers being not true alchemical powers. Cale seemed to forget all about that.

Other than that, I love this and some day, I hope you'll continue this.

Echoing the others, I hope you've not forgotten this story. It's been nearly three years, and I think a lot of us are getting worried you may have given up on it.

I have just read this story for the first time and I absolutely loved it. Hands down. I want updates! Or at least a sign your alive and you might return someday

Hi! I've absolutely been loving this story, and I've been wondering if you plan to continue it at all or if it's just going to be left alone for the rest of time?

If you don't plan to continue it, would you mind at least telling me how it ends? It wouldn't be quite the same, but I'm simply dying to know.

Thank you so much for writing this story! Your characters are divine, and it makes me happy how long it took for them to get together- a good wait makes it even sweeter when they actually do.

I just know that Cale is going to get himself into trouble with this seeing spell thing.

I can't help but wonder what happened to the other captured creatures? Sounds like Rizak broke free, but did the others?

If somebody bothers to read til almost the end of the se3cond story, they definitely don't hate it! I usually know by the 1st or 2nd chapter if it's something I can't read - either the story is poorly written, doesn't make sense, the horrendous spelling or grammar is too distracting, something...I like your stories, am fond of Cale.

It has been a bit off-putting that you changed it, I saw nothing in this second story that needed the changes you made & it jolts me whenever a changed bit comes up and I have to remember it's different, but it is your story, so...Off I go reading the rest.

Good job, BTW.

Nooo! You can't stop writing this; I'm completely addicted to this world! Ugh. Come back. I won't write a proper review until you do! :(

(So I can make sure you actually read it, lol.)