This looks promising and I enjoyed reading that first chapter so keep it up! :)

I really, really like this story so far. I've never read a story that involved gay love in it, nor have I ever been interested. But I really like it! I like how Jarred's personality and view on his relationship with C.M is. He loves him, yet he knows that keeping their relationship a secret is breaking them down. I'm sure it's true in a lot of homosexual couples, and I'm glad you brought it into play. Here are a few simple things that aren't a big deal at all:

"My face would defianantly be in pain the next day." - I think you spelt 'definitely' wrong. Simple mistake, no worries.

"He was graduating in less than one weeks" - The plural usage of 'weeks' doesn't work with the singular 'one.' If you keep it as one week, you should take off the s, I think.

"Remember your the one who taught me," - 'Your' is describing ownership. 'You're' is a contraction for 'you are,' and I'm pretty sure you meant to use the contraction.

"Yeah right, Lier!" - *Liar

"lonly walk down the carpet" - *Lonely

And I noticed that sometimes you use the word 'to' when it should be 'too,' as in, as well, also, etc.

Keep writing!

Nice. Very nice. Would like to know where it goes from here. :)

Promising. Very very promising. Updates would be AWESOME