this is great! so honest and flowy and great.
wonderful write.

i love this piece the words are so honest and relatable and those are always the best poems

I find this to be a very honest poem. Relatable, too. I like your style. The final sentence really encapsulates the whole poem, and gives me, as a reader, that 'breath in your mouth' feeling of joy when reading. It's very life-affirming. I don't know if this made any sense, but, well, thank you for writing.

oh october
october and november are such inspiring times i think - not just the weather imagery blah blah blah, but the season change. it makes your entire attitude, social life, mood etc change with it. you got that

i didn't wear a coat today. i don't know why i'm still resisting.

i like poems about october.

" & i’m tired of proving them right "
awesome!

"while i have a tendency to fall for the ones that are a little bit
full of themselves.
my birthday’s coming up real soon and
i’m itching to do something reckless,
remember that i’m still alive."

I CAN RELATE, HOW IRONIC.
Hhaha, Awesome piece, definitely room in my faves for it :)

maybe you must live in california. this was a wonderful read that had a very flowing sense to the poem. something so simple that feels that there's just something more. nothing but compliments from me.

keep up the great work