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WhiteLightningfromSwiftRiver 2008-10-29 . chapter 1
That's so sad...is there a reason behind it?
LaughterThroughTears 2008-10-25 . chapter 1
Aww, great poem! I know how you feel. I like how you said everything out.
Fractured Illusion 2008-10-18 . chapter 1
Nice conclusion to the poem, I think it wrapped it up neatly :)
A suggestion would be to add more description or metaphors into your poetry. It makes it standout more, that way.

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