 Lady of the Western Forest. 2008-11-09 . chapter 1Oh my... goddesses. That was amazing, I absolutely loved it! There was a few speeling and grammar mistakes, there always are, but nothing a quick read-through wouldn't take care of.
I love the way you describe things, it seems somehow poetic, yet leaves a lot to imagination. I repeat that I absolutely loved it, for there are no other words that describes what I felt about it.
Only one thing made me wonder... what did you mean when you said the northerners has long ears? Or is it just the galae, no matter. |