Wow!I liked this story because it was very emotional.I could feel her pain throughout the story.I liked the many adjectives you used in this story,creates a better image to the reader. I enjoyed the numbers in the parenthesis. :)

Wow, this is so emotional. Especially the end, it really shows the superficiality of people. Well done!

what

(not in a good way)

Aw no!

That's so sad...

Wonderfully written, as usual.