hilarious! love it !

so damn crazy! i loved it, and that girl sure has guts xD

This was so funny! I loved how you tell us all the thoughts that go through Anna's mind, and then have her say:

My answer to Jae: “He draws pretty unicorns.”

Your characters here were really memorable too, especially the ninja Jae!

Sakina xx

[btw, you have been repaid, from the Roadhouse with love!]

Well this was just cute! Very light hearted and all good fun. Certain lines in it were really quirky and made me laugh, which if you can make the reader laugh is always a good thing. Nice work! This was REALLY adorable!

Shuun shuun! Ha I want zach I mean purple haired boy who draws unicorns? Swoon! I'm not even joking, I dreamt about a guy with purple hair the other day, I have a sign on my door that says happy unicorn day and everything :) I LOVED this story

I loved it.

] I like how it was a simple dare and also how the guy wasn't preppy. It made the story seem more fun. ]

It doesn't get better than this!

Great work,

E.

haha I really thought you were basing this on reality when I read this. Turns out, you weren't, but still...haha

Haha ohmygod that was so funny. And insanely cute. I liked how you didnt make it like some overly complex dare, and I liked how Zach wasnt a typical preppy boy. Purple hair and silver eyes? Brownie points for originality )

That was on of the all time most amazing things I have ever read.

I laughed from start to finish - absolutely no lies.

AMAZING!

oh, i love it! :P if only real life were this much fun :D

“What do you see in him, anyways?” Jae asked with one eyebrow raised. She’s the most brutal and violent person I know. She probably beat my information out of Sue with her secret stash of nunchucks. I’m not kidding, either. Jae says she’s a ninja, and I believe her.

*Cough* I know that was based on me x]

Anywayys hilarious story, especially because I was picturing you in Anna's shoes (you know it's based on you x])

OH SNAP! I love this story already!

omg, update soon.

cute! it really made me laugh and smile :)

i like how you used elements of reality and twisted them beyond repair. yay. maybe.

you should come to school instead of writing stories though.