REALLY well written! I am almost afraid to ask what inspired you. The twins seem so real, almost-very visual writing. Great horrifing piece.

Very good job! I've been doing these kinds of stories for a while, and I have to say that this is indeed original. Insanity is always a fun topic to write about, isn't it? So many different ways to go...

Anyway, keep up the good work! I'll be looking for more of these stories soon!