|Reviews for Aphrodite's Apology|
| Paintorama-Writer 11/1/08 . chapter 1
I really liked how you did Aprodites aplogy letter or whatever. So umm... I also adore greek mytholgy. Theress a show about greek mythology, not one but two shows... I think. Anyway good job!
| elegos-sirinial-shamtul 10/25/08 . chapter 1
You write very well. I'm sure that Aphrodite has a LOT of apologies to write ;-)
(My first review on fiction press)
| Articous 10/24/08 . chapter 1
I enjoy reading things at different perspectives from usual. An apology letter from Aphrodite caught my attention, and this was a fairly amusing letter. Perhaps you would be interested in reading my take on Aphrodite in my romance, The Book of the Celestial Goddess of Beauty. (Lengthy title). I found this entertaining though. The first sentence you spelled apologise with an 's' and it should be 'apologize' with a 'z'. That's the only immediate mistake I saw at glance.
| Vancariad 10/18/08 . chapter 1
THIS IS SO AWSOME!
I've often wanted to write a myth from the god/goddess' point of view, this is just hysterical!
| Astaroche 10/18/08 . chapter 1
Cute, humorous and very entertaining. No criticism for you.
| Tranquil Thorns 10/18/08 . chapter 1
'Naturally Eris must have meant for it to be given to me'
'More like he was too chicken to give the apple to me over his wife and daughter!'
Haha. P Those were some of my favorite lines.
I really liked Aphrodite's voice in this. Very funny and amusing to read. Maybe you can write more stories with her as the narrator? *hint hint*
Anyway, nice job!