I like this...

um, "emo phase"?

xxfaith

I didn't really like this all that much, because it seemed more like a list than a poem. I think you have a lot to work with, but you just need to develop it more.

"existance" existence

"volnerable" vulnerable

-Othello, from the Review Marathon (link on profile)

'Trust no one.' I just finished watching an X-Files re-run, so that line pretty much made my life :P :)

The last line, 'Die' although simple, really hit me; it was emotional and intense.