Now THIS is the type of poem I would love for a girl to write me.
So elegant and graceful, but speaking of the dirtiest of things.
So beautiful and stylistic- and ending with the best possible way.

half the fun is usually what's forbidden. You explore this shamelessly and I admire that in a writer.
"leave the judgment
To my nerve endings,
Firing, crackling"

I particularly love that part. It jumped at me when I read it. Nice work.

The last two lines make this whole poem worthwhile. As does the title, I think, interestingly... and the summary and the warnings, which do become part of the piece. I love that juxtaposition of self-conscious, post-moralist denial - "this is wrong, this is dirty, this is perverse; I know I like it but I shouldn't" - against the un-self-conscious admission, revelation, catharsis (and supplication?) of "I love it when you ** me". I think the lurking shame is more perverse than the desire, and I love how the speaker breaks free of it. Kudos!

I love your word choices. I know exactly what you're saying, even though I would never be able to put it into words myself.

The last two lines- best ever. :)

Lol. I like the message here, especially the ending! Nice work with this piece.

I kind of understand how you feel. In a way.

Hahah, I like the line 'And leave the judgment/ To my nerve endings'

I like the reflective nature of this poem, and from your perspective, as-it-is-written, it really does carry the undertone of experience and afterthought. Eh, that wasn't written that well... also, the last few lines do sum up the mood pretty well lol.

Like some of your other freestyles this poem also makes me cognizant of how perspective can be an even more powerful tool than any literary device... o.o nerdalert!

O YUMMY! if there was anyway to describe hot awesome incredible sex this would definately be helpful! the worst part is I have a date with my boyfriend in 30 minutes and I'm as horny as **. not cuz of this poem, only a little bit, but mostly cuz I got a ** HOT boyfriend thats coming over to my house and I haven't ** him yet, whom also I'm crazy in love with. **! this is a problem. anyways wicked poem love it, and it would be plain AWKWARD if anyone I know on a personal basis to read something like that, if I wrote it. or maybe my friends would be chill, I'm way to open sometimes. the ending was cool, it adds more emphasize how the pleasure really is a pleasure.

I understand why you said "If you know me on any sort of personal level - don't read this" besides that, it was a good way to express your thoughts and emotions on this subject. (The last line kind of took me by surprise though):o. W/e great poem!

Haha, well then. I love the last line because it's like a twist at the end of the story. Everything is all jolly and nice and then you get that. Makes this interesting to read. Also, the writing style with which you chose to write this fits this piece so well because it doesn't seem cheesy or awkward at all. Nicely done.

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I love this poem, I love this poem, at the end I was cracking up...for some reason I did not expect that...but it was great none the less... I especially love "Sans euphemistic nomenclature"...Ima be using that from now on!

You know I do like this. It has something that I just..I duno,like. Good job! :)