i now wish that i knew what an a7 chord sounds like. it bites, but i like that.

Aw, this is a beautiful piece. I've never been in a relationship like this, but I can still feel it.
It's amazingly triumphant.
"because you don't recycle memories,
you recycle chords and lyrics until they're just right."

Pretty passage. ^_^
Great poem!

wow, the metaphors with the music is great.
I like specially the last verse.

I like this. I like the parallelism, and the general ideas. Is it supposed to be lyrics? Because I really wish I could hear it with music--it seems like it would be even better if it had background music.

~Tears of IceFire