thats really good
its sad abot her dad though
update soon

"Won’t that make things easier?"... Wouldn't, it's future not past

I didn't like how you repeated yourself in describing your family. I would just start with the specifics.

I like the piece because the whole introducing yourself is definitely something I can relate to. I also like the whole one sided conversation thing, it works well with the idea behind the piece.

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Haha, that was a very interesting introduction.
I really liked the tone of this piece, it was very conversational and sucked me right into your story. I also liked the way that you made a pithy observation to start because it made me laugh. It's so true though, introducing yourself to people at parties is annoying.

Good job on this,
-Ink-