 Counting Petals 2008-10-19 . chapter 1Review Marathon! (If you're confused, there's a link on my profile.)
Overall, this was pretty good. My only real issue with it was in a few random details, because some of those confused me. For instance, three-foot-high walls? And they're impressive because...?
Other than that, though, I liked it, mostly because I could sense some drama coming of this at the end, and also because I sort of want to know what Agyness did that made her mom move her. |