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misery sister 2008-10-19 . chapter 1
I know that you're trying to get unique names - one, because names used a lot get boring, and well, the characters aren't English - but sometimes, maybe you should choose names that actually make sense. Like... some that your readers could sort of have an easy time remembering, and i dunno, in your case, pronouncing? Hahaha I have no idea how to pronounce Lgy.

And I also started wondering why such eccentric names come up like Ell, Lgy - and all of a sudden, a rather English name like Jules comes off. Sorta threw me off the theme.

Okay, but other than that useless nitpicking of mine, it was written pretty well. :)
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