That was something. Uhm, so anyway, where did Maria go? Heehee. I was curious. And well, I guess that I wished there were more chapters to the story. Please add. Haha. Oops, gotta go, but that was really interesting. Continue! :)

Whoa. That was cool. Haha, I didn't expect that her family killed her, I actually thought it was Jozef. Aww, she's gonna kill a 14 year old? Anyway, that was good. :)

So cool, they're soulmates. And I kind of get the conversations now, but well, uhm, a little bit of work on the labeling and everything's perfect. Haha. Sorry. Anyway, this is good. . .
:)

Hello! Your story is interesting. . . it's good but I kind of got confused in some parts, well, in the conversations. I don't get who is talking 'cause it's like the person who is supposed to talk is not talking. Yeah. Haha. But, uhm, it's good! :)

I would love an epilogue

this is extremely confusing. i like your idea but the whole way that you wrote this story is really really confussing.

Please update! Please! Please!

sounds awesome