"There so little I can do"... There's

I like this. The rhyming worked well, not forced. I also think the last stanza was a great conclusion to the piece and the repetition there worked well.

This is beautiful. =)
Really deep meaning, I love it.

this is sad but very good. sometimes letting go is for the best and i know this feeling well enough too. there's just a point where we have to call it quits. I liked the way you stated that though you have a lot of unfinished business with the person you ended the song with a decision to "walk away" still i hope you find a way to keep that important person in your life but if you don't then you know it wasn't meant to be.