What a mess! What an ending! :D Reading your story is fun!

Continue writing please. :)

Bravo. That was great. I wasn't expecting that ending. Great job.

Oh wow. I'm going to read the next chapter. Good shit.

You end your chapters the same and I like that. Good job.

I like the way you end your chapters. I'll continue to read.

I loved the way this started. Very strong beginning.

Hah! That was a wonderful ending.

You know, i actually really like the ending. It suits the story well enough and i know it would have dragged on for way too long if you attempted to sort her out.

I dont like the journalist sister though - bah, xD

But we arent supposed to are we?

AT LAST i love this story, no major faults and its fully intact

Love eet

Everybody wants a piece on Lennie.

Really nice story, it was great

Oh wow...I love this story. It's sinfully great-taboo, sexy, funny...wow. Great job so far.

i LOVE the phrase you used on chapter three about the bomg. Absolutely awesome

I forgot the word but its a good one

GETTING BETTER

I love this story :P

Keep it up love!

Sam

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Two words that describe the last two chaps are OH SHIT!

They were great.

Can't wait for the next update

Nice i like it can't wait to c what LenxKate is gonna do next

i will personally stalk your account, delete it then laugh manically if thois is the story you said you were ashamed of.

This is amazing.

i spotted a few mistakes here and there but this is lacking in nothing

i love the layout and everything

WOMAN give me your brain - i need it :P

Awesomely written, cant wait for more

sam

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