I like Ann she's tough, but not emotionless. I admire her strength for being able to show her feelings for David, even if it is in a letter. To be honest, I wouldn't be able to.

Grtz Silencia

is this the end? please continue!

I really liked this. It was different, definitely, and it wasn't a cookie cutter ending. Good job.

Wow. I can totally relate to this story, except I've never actually tried to kill myself. The being in love, the eyes, the voice, the shortness, the age, the mood of the letter... I like the mood of the letter the best. Good job, really good job.