 Thornberry 2009-09-05 . chapter 1Very beautiful. And magnificently written |
 RobinAmon 2008-12-07 . chapter 1aw I don't know if anyone has told you this yet, but this is simply one of the sweetest things I ever read. It's like a note a husband would leave for a wife. A wife that they love dearly. I say good job to you for writing something so meaningful and beautiful. |
 fatbird33 2008-10-25 . chapter 1aw. i really liked this, it was quite pretty. i liked the last line:) |
 FallenAngelFromTheSky 2008-10-22 . chapter 1wow, that was very captivating and very beautiful. i like it! |
 ilovevampires2 2008-10-20 . chapter 1That was beautiful...I love it. That's probably the most beautiful poem I've read. |