That poem is really...good. You have to read it a few times to get the full meaning of it (this is a good thing not a bad thing.)
This is probably a wrong guess but is this poem about a recovering alcholic or something? Because the last couple of lines sort of sound like he's debating whether or not to give up fully or go back to the drink.
Great poem. I like the rhyme scheme as well.

Charli

wow! this was powerful! i loved it! :)
i did not get the last line though, care to explain?

i get the last line! but then, you knew that i would... anyway, it was good. and true.
Luv,
Gloria

Hey Zoey!
I think this is your best poem yet. I didn't really get the meaning, but I'm sure I will once I think it through and look at it from a different perpestive. But over all it was very intelligent and well written. I always look forward to reading your poems. They always have a meaning behind them and make my heart warmed afterwards. I understand that you can only write when you have the passion to. That is how it is for a real author anyway. So keep up the good work and I look foreward to your next poem!!

Katie