Wow... I love this story! I even skipped very important school work for it... =P Well, good job! ^^

Hey again! Still going through your stories and I'm starting this one about to go to the next chapter but I figured I would point out the errors this time, since I seem to keep forgetting. I will hold my review of the story until later though if thats alright :).

Alright here we go. There is only one-

"Llit gives her a slight disappointed look, but resignedly begins to pick up his things. The walk to their house complex is short and Tranquil-" I think you meant Tranquil to be tranquil and not her name. AND "-in order to keep her mind off things, tries to make Llit’s escaping hair fall into his face, without him noticing." I think it's supposed to be '-in order to keep her mind off things, she tries'. Ok so thats two but it would only be if you did mean her name, so yea. Hehe.

Oh and side note (sorry for being so lengthy :(. ) I always tend to read reviews on a story before I begin to read it. Only like the first two or so. But I read the last one for this story and just wanted to say that I had a completely different reaction to your name that you might find a little funny. When I stumbled onto your story through somehow I can't remember right now I remember I was a couple chapters in and cuddled up on my couch and I'm talking to my boyfriend about your deep insights in there and he says "Whats the name of it?" and I was like "Oh, its His Eyes by Your Butt..." and he just sat there and stared at me like I was crazy. Then we cracked up laughing. Ever since then every time I see your user id I just giggle a little bit on the inside. But anyways...wow, sorry long review...

-Yusta

It was such a disappointment to me to see your name. Uh huh. Your penname. Your butt. Can't you have came up with anything better? meh...

hahaha..I'm surprised that I didn't read this story sooner. It deserves SO MUCH more reviews than what it have gotten. I can't understand why. =/ I guess people just never find it eh? (I found it through search engine...:D)

but wow. It's such a good story...I finished it all in one night. And no, just to make YOU feel more special (and i love to rant) I'll tell you how BUSY I am today and how much I SHOULDN'T have even read the FIRST chapter 'cause I'm SO busy *stares* hahaha...well, rant: I have a summative, worth 30 per cent of my final mark, due first thing in the morning, exactly six hours away from now, and I HAVEN'T STARTED. Not a single bit. i was suppose to start right after dinner tonight, but my god, I found your story, I was REALLY curious, so I finished the first two chapters...

then...

no thanks to you, since it was too good...

I COULDN'T STOP READING. I tried. i tried. BUT I CAN'T. so many times I closed this window, telling my self "No, you can't...you're busy. else you'll fail this course..." but NOPE. I can't help it. It was THAT good. (But don't worry; I'll hand in my summative late, and just..well, okay, not just, but still get a 10 per cent deduction =/)

This story is REALLY really good. =O And I hope i got that point cross really really clearly. 'cause omg. Wow. =O

And like, I didn't notice your pen name till I'm on the last chapter - Epilogue..xD I found it a bit amusing and, well, disappointing, since this story was so good, I was ASSUMING I'd see a 'deep penname that would have some kind of deep represenation or intellectual thought triggering effect' -- but NOPE. xD none of that. XD..haha..XD yourbutt..

but hey! I did achieve something else, now that pen name, your pen name, is one that would not be forgotten by me. =)

hehe anyways..

great story. Thanks for writing, I just wish to the dear gods that I had found this earlier. @_@; it's so addictive...

I don't know WHY this story only have five reviews; it clearly deserve a lot more. After only finishing three chapters + intro; it's REALLY good. =O

Yup yup. that's all I have to say for this review; LOLS; since i'm not done the story. (and hey hey, it's good enough that I'm skipping homework x_x; to read it. lols. =3)

Good intro, lets see if the rest is as good.

Wow, I really, REALLY, love your first chapter! It's so amazing. I have it pretty much beta-ed, but some of the verb tenses were slightly strange, so I'm going to take another look at it tomorrow. Expect it sometime tommorrow night or Wednesday morning.
Great!

Got my attention, update soon.

This looks like a very promising story, and I hope it gets started and rolling very soon.

Oh wow! This is a really good prologue, I hope you continue it. I hope that the words come easily for you and that all may admire your great work.
With best regards,
Gingerleaf