I like the idea, it's very sweet and easy to relate to. There are some grammatical errors, but other than that very nice.

I love the emotions you show in this piece. They are very apparent and are conveyed very well. As usual, nice work, you are a very talented writer.

Beautifully written.

:)

I love the positive attitue writen here.

"don't give a damn to that bullshit,

you're great for who you are,"

Nice. Keep writing.

Ein schönes, tröstliches Gedicht.

"A tear won't make you weak,

maybe you're too strong."

I loved those lines. There's sense a great sense of beauty and pain within them :)

Isca