Well, that was freaking awesome. XD There should be more of this, what's wrong with you? Making this a one shot...

Aww, this was great, V! Thank you so very, very much. :3

Hey, 3/5-7 reviews. Looks like you might have to write more soon. *hoping so*

Ve... I wish it were longer D:

Some awkward wording in places but it got exciting when they caught up to their prey ;D

Your story is very detailed, I'm really jealous of your talent. After all I write stories, but I can never get it as discipled as i want it to be. So keep up the writing, your really good at it.