Very nice use of words, really. The layout of the poem actually made it better.

Heh. Who knew I would ever read a poem about sex? xD

Now you owe me TWO.

But, really, this was actually nice...I mean in a good way not in a 'sex is nice' sorta way. xD Cause, I wouldnt know...And fankly, after a bad experience this Christmas with yaoi doushinjis...I dont think I want to have sex. xD Ever.

Blame Tristan. He bought them.

And has them.

And my mom looks at me funny...

heartrenchingly sad. you feel their shame profoundly.

this is a marvellous poem. the word choice is great and so is the choice in picked out details, they allude to a deeper, more complicated tale but reveal just enough to be part of the moment, without knowing the history. really cool x