lol very interesting poem ohh The last line was funny lol :D

Haha, that was funny.
Good poem:)

First off, I loved the writing. It was well written and fun to read. Very simple to understand but feels very strong. The last line is fun and I wish it continued. My head went through a rush of multiple finishes. Did you have any ideas? I'm not expecting a novel or a second poem, but did you finish it in your mind?