|Reviews for The Words Inscribed Are Sad, The Meaning Is Worse|
| InkCheetah 12/6/08 . chapter 1
The words after the poem are going to stick with me so much longer, I think...
Now I wish I could pick up the phone and give him a reason why he's not as empty as he thinks.
| no.peace.los.angeles 10/24/08 . chapter 1
I love the last two lines of this; somehow the images of ivory and a corset make the poem even lonelier than it already was. I'm not so sure about the cyanide bit, just because it's maybe a bit overly dramatic, but maybe that's the affect you were going for. A nice, simple poem, that says so much more. Keep writing! :)