omg..so this is like what happens before one of the boys..
love ur stories, keep it up!

that was so awesome yeah you def hav to write more

oh that jerk!
This is great because it shows the details of what happens before "One of the Boys".
Keepp it up!
-Moon Night

That was completely awesome! I'm wondering if the preview was three days after they did it like it said earlier on in the story.

Love it!

cant wait to read more!

this was a great chapter! I can't decide if I liked the teaser at the end though...only because now i really really want to read the second chapter. so please update soon :)
Oh and I love one of the boys, too!

Hi!!

This is so exciting! I love One of the boys, so this is going to be awesome too, my clairvoyant skills predict. Luke is sketchy, and I'm curious to see exactly how everything unfolds. Update booth soon!!