I think this was really nice! It was about something that really makes the reader think through the poem and the words. I liked how you wrote it, with the many paragraphs, for then each line stood out. I liked how you, with the wrting style, knitted the sentences together, connecting them. I liked that you didn't explain what you meant, creating such a unique feeling for the poem. This will go in my favorites!

Keep writing!

The Reverse Edge Blade

i got confused during the "stay/say" part... but i think i'm a bit dyslexic sometimes, so it might just be me... otherwise it was good! :)