 Aradia Cloud 2009-10-27 . chapter 2Aw hell... she lost the baby. That cocky bastard; where does he get off making her miscarry? Anywhoo... keep updating coz reading citezens like me are waiting for the next chapter. |
 XxSiennaxX 2009-08-21 . chapter 2I really like your sequel so far - I wish she hadn't miscarried, especially after she found out Alec could hear its heartbeat.
Are you planning on updating? Please do - I can't wait to read more :) |
 jadeen 2009-07-13 . chapter 2 Awsome chapter =) |
 x13Ren13x 2009-05-05 . chapter 2ZOMG I adore this story! It's addictive...So write more, please! |
 simplyanaddiction 2009-04-24 . chapter 2next chapter please!! the baby miscarried. damn!
well, its going well and the next chapter would be great. |
 Sakiru Yume 2009-04-23 . chapter 2Um, nice story. They both kind of overreact, sort of, but it's nice, because that means it's not just one of those "I love you" "I love you too" "Let's get married and live happily ever after even though I met you yesterday" stories. It's refreshing. :) |
 cherryreads 2009-02-15 . chapter 2I loved the first story and the start of this one!
Even though I can't believe I read everything in one night but i'm glad I did!
update as soon as you can!!
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 claire 2009-01-28 . chapter 2 Oh please let them have a baby and be happy!! |
 unknown 2009-01-28 . chapter 2 ugh... dude...its been forever and your storys = awesome! please write more!! |
 Nemo Forevermore 2009-01-26 . chapter 2Omgoth, a sequel, yay! =D
I cant belive she had a miscarriage =( thats so sad
and gah, sometimes Jarad is SO oblivious to her feelings!
Great story! Update soon! =D |
 HeatherLee 2009-01-22 . chapter 2Hey,
sorry it took me so long to review your story. the only thing i noticed is that in two different places you messed up to and too. not that big of a deal. also, its better to not add in things like *cough* and instead, describe him coughing or blushing or mumbling or whatever. other than that the chapter was good, i think things could have gone a little slower but all in all good. cant wait for the next one.
Heather |
 Ashleigh Elizabeth 2008-12-10 . chapter 2 I love this story, I loved lov bites, i do keep up with the stories i just dont always have a chance to review and when i do, i completely forget to... in other words read the story, log off, go home, check email, forget to review...lol...but it is very intresting and i would love to read it somemore.. i dont know how to describe it but yes your plot really catches my attention, also the fact about it being about vampires... i love anything vampires and if i could i would love to be friends with one... im not sure if i would want to be one...lol..but anyways, keep updating please it is very intresting...
Thanks always
Ashleigh )
P.S. email me anytime you would like. |
 ChristianAngel01 2008-11-29 . chapter 2whoa I read the first two chapters man more drama I dont how much more I can take reading this drama man cant wait to read the next chapter :) |
 peacebstill 2008-11-19 . chapter 2aw no,
Why did she have to miscarry. Uh, I wanted her to have a bay with him. I mean I wanted to know how the child would progress especially since she is half vampire and hal warewolf. Aw, that just sucks but oh well I guess more drama is still to come. I still love ya though (lol) |
 peacebstill 2008-11-19 . chapter 1I love the fact that she is pregant. I want Sarah and Jared to have a beautiful healthy baby. I know that there are twists turns along the way but I can't wait for you to describe the look on hs face when he hears the news. (oh maybe twins wouldn't that be cool) lol
Peace |