 iFly 2009-09-21 . chapter 1Alright, since I've already favorited I think two of your poems, I though I'd review one and tell you that your writing is amazing :) |
 Aurora Corona 2008-10-25 . chapter 1Oh criss!!
Can you ever write something not angst and horror or whatever??
But seriously. This poem is scary, but beautiful.
I love the middle stanza too. Especially the way you relate it to a child's cravings for candy. That was seriously cool.
Update more more more!
Lovess,
SP. |
 Zena Silverwing 2008-10-23 . chapter 1wow. amazing. the feeling of the poem, the message. hell does sound pretty cool...
i loved reading this poem. |
 fatbird33 2008-10-23 . chapter 1wow. good descriptions, nice job of putting the reader there,i also liked the stuff in italics. |
 EyesEmphatic 2008-10-23 . chapter 1LOVE the middle stanza. Great imagery :) |