Funny poem :) Your "scary" place aka your mind sounds like so much fun..I wish I could go there. xD Anyways, I like the part where you mention God and the ipod..it fits together with the 'piracy' line. hehe..very interesting poem. :) -mit

I like it. I can honestly say I've never read anything like it before. The 10 eyes and solid-gold iPod are my favorite part. The bird references hold the piece together.